The Lyrics to a Heart Beat
By: James Revels III
Perfected Mona Lisa’s smile,
Her grin bends any frown.
Only see her once in a while,
but that time adds up when she comes down.
Her beautifully sculpted mind,
Chiseled like the Thinker,
Should be displayed in the Lourve
Solving my problems with nothing to prove.
Even when tides change the moon phase,
She finds ways to rise to occasions,
Even though we meet in our home town,
Moments feel like vacations.
My best friend,
The only one of top
And I hope in the end,
You place me in the same spot.
Can’t invent a teleportor,
but imagine this as a telegram that transfers my heart toward her.
So keep it locked up safe and listen to the biorhythms,
because if you listen closely you’ll decipher these words in them.
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I like the circularity in this.
Very nice.
Thank you. I appreciate the compliment
love the last three lines so much. beautiful.
Thanks for the praise. I’m glad you liked my poem :D
Very interesting my friend. I love your style, I can’t say I’ve come across anything similar. Quite unique.
Thank you for the praise. I really appreciate it
This one takes a while to build (for me) toward the last two couplets (exquisite). As a whole, it is very engaging. [Lourve = Louvre]
Wonderful, you are very inspiring :)
love it!witty
Thanks :D
Wonderful imagery! “her beautifully sculpted mind” – lighthearted but conveying a lot of feeling.
I’ll definitely be back to read more. thank you.
Guila
Thanks for your support :D
Thanx! for liking my post ! appreciate it!
liked your work too ,the Lyrics of a Heart beat ..seems so simple and true! lovely
I love the details you’ve used, and the rhythm is really lovely.
Thank you I’m appreciate you noticing the work I put into my poetry and stoping by
No problem!
Beautiful, I like the imagery!
Thank you for the appriciation
Welcome!
“Moments feel like vacations” – Universal to those of us who have truly loved. Well phrased!
Firstly, I loved the title!
And the style is definitely something unique! “Moments feel like vacations.” :-)
Great! Loved it!
Thank a billion. I hope you continue to enjoy my works