The Lyrics to a Heart Beat

5 Feb

The Lyrics to a Heart Beat 

By: James Revels III

Perfected Mona Lisa’s smile,

Her grin bends any frown.

Only see her once in a while,

but that time adds up when she comes down.

Her beautifully sculpted mind,

Chiseled like the Thinker,

Should be displayed in the Lourve

Solving my problems with nothing to prove.

Even when tides change the moon phase,

She finds ways to rise to occasions,

Even though we meet in our home town,

Moments feel like vacations.

My best friend,

The only one of top

And I hope in the end,

You place me in the same spot.

Can’t invent a teleportor,

but imagine this as a telegram that transfers my heart toward her.

So keep it locked up safe and listen to the biorhythms,

because if you listen closely you’ll decipher these words in them.

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23 Responses to “The Lyrics to a Heart Beat”

  1. VeronicaThePajamaThief February 5, 2012 at 23:07 #

    I like the circularity in this.

  2. dannypuppet February 6, 2012 at 05:13 #

    Very nice.

    • Leo Rex February 6, 2012 at 12:03 #

      Thank you. I appreciate the compliment

  3. Holls February 6, 2012 at 11:42 #

    love the last three lines so much. beautiful.

    • Leo Rex February 6, 2012 at 12:06 #

      Thanks for the praise. I’m glad you liked my poem :D

  4. derekasim February 6, 2012 at 12:27 #

    Very interesting my friend. I love your style, I can’t say I’ve come across anything similar. Quite unique.

    • Leo Rex February 6, 2012 at 12:29 #

      Thank you for the praise. I really appreciate it

  5. gabrielgarbowota February 7, 2012 at 09:26 #

    This one takes a while to build (for me) toward the last two couplets (exquisite). As a whole, it is very engaging. [Lourve = Louvre]

  6. dancefarie February 24, 2012 at 15:52 #

    Wonderful, you are very inspiring :)

  7. poemstephen February 26, 2012 at 23:07 #

    love it!witty

  8. Guila Greer February 27, 2012 at 00:01 #

    Wonderful imagery! “her beautifully sculpted mind” – lighthearted but conveying a lot of feeling.
    I’ll definitely be back to read more. thank you.

    • Leo Rex February 27, 2012 at 20:58 #

      Thanks for your support :D

  9. heeruthe1 March 4, 2012 at 00:08 #

    Thanx! for liking my post ! appreciate it!
    liked your work too ,the Lyrics of a Heart beat ..seems so simple and true! lovely

  10. Michelle March 7, 2012 at 15:54 #

    I love the details you’ve used, and the rhythm is really lovely.

    • Leo Rex March 7, 2012 at 22:28 #

      Thank you I’m appreciate you noticing the work I put into my poetry and stoping by

      • Michelle March 7, 2012 at 22:38 #

        No problem!

  11. stephanie fitzpatrick March 9, 2012 at 12:42 #

    Beautiful, I like the imagery!

  12. dpbowman April 18, 2012 at 10:39 #

    “Moments feel like vacations” – Universal to those of us who have truly loved. Well phrased!

  13. Anwesha April 18, 2012 at 12:53 #

    Firstly, I loved the title!
    And the style is definitely something unique! “Moments feel like vacations.” :-)
    Great! Loved it!

    • Leo Rex April 19, 2012 at 02:09 #

      Thank a billion. I hope you continue to enjoy my works

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