My Soul will Never Die
Because I shed light,
Shadows always follow,
Which is why I see myself as leader;
A rebel who hangs from gallows.
Although, they chop my head,
my dream won’t sever from every Body,
so my soul’s never dead.
Just sleeping in someone’s heart,
Waiting to wake from bed.
-James Revels III
good one
Nicely done! I see we have a common taste in poetry. : )
C.S: Lewis said “You are a soul – you have a body”. :-)
C.S. Lewis = genius
Very hopeful.
Red.
Thank you
Very well done! I love to write and I think poetry is amazing but I can’t write it to save my life.
lol thanks for the compliment. maybe one day you’ll be able to come up with something.
Yep….a universal truth if one stops to hear it.
agreed. thanks for reading my blog
Technically speaking, the one emitting the light never have shadow.
But the one receiving light would cast a shadow behind.
you have a valid point but I never specified the shadows to be my shadow, I’m taking about shadows in general :3 thanks for taking time to read my post
Very nice one..!! and btw thanks for liking my post..!!
Your very welcome and thank you taking time to read my blog
very good poem and fine write!
Ciao, Francina
Thank you!
Interesting.
I really like this one.
Thank you for visiting my blog. :)
Interesting concept of leadership.Remember leadership doesn’t have to sacrifice to be right.
tru. that depends on how open minded everyone else is around him
that was really nice :) and thanks for dropping by my blog too…
plz take a look at poems i wrote.. they are all on my life
As you are a creature of Light
As you are a creature of Logic
As you express respect for the Architect
I shall tell you soul is a pure form of energy N urge G
and G is the center of Logic and of Light
Your spirit is what you are and soul is the energy you need
I shall now empower your Mitochondria
To maximize my prophets and profits
12 years ago I took over all yeast on Earth
Now you have super human energy
But you must about alcohol or it will stop
My Might is controlled by Mitochondria and yeast
G is the center of MIGHT RIGHT LIGHT and SIGHT
I shall fill your spirit with my soul and you shall almost glow
I am the Master of Masters